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Fly away to heavens gate by ~YuukiTree:iconYuukiTree:





Fly away to heavens gate
Do not let the sinners touch your fate
Do not stray from the long journey up
the light will guide you all the way

Little ones who cry in bed
though nothing scary in their head
dreams of angels flying through
innocent beauty on the ground

Flowers bloom inside your head
but sadly it is that you are dead
my child born upon this day
to die upon the evening passed

Fly, my child to heavens gate,
where angels may greet you
and love you still
earth is no longer your domain
©2004-2009 ~YuukiTree
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Submitted: August 26, 2004
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Beautiful! I like the line "Don not let the sinner touch your fate" Perfect length too.

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Tomorrow and tomorrow and tomorrow...
this one was because you provoked me for art, I think i'm going to go do some photography in a few days. city life type, perhaps.

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Mmmm.... [link]
:licking: :fuzzydemon:
looking forward to it.

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Tomorrow and tomorrow and tomorrow...
wow thats good...O.o I'm faving this! :clap:

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~Follow the little bubbley things~
thank you, especially since it's off the top of my head...

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Mmmm.... [link]
:licking: :fuzzydemon:
yw and ty for posting it!:hug:

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~Follow the little bubbley things~
i love the style of writing you've choosen here.....very effective.I can't put my finger on it-it's just the style seems to be neither modern or gothic or lyrical or other typical forms i come across lots on this site. the style seems archaic but very elegent. The stanzas flow very neatly and the meaning is conveyed both directly and succintly- i'm really impresssed by this piece *favourites it*........it shows a lot of virtues within your writing skills.
here is the secret, it'm my style, 4 line stanzas, some rhythm and (i forgot how to spell rhyme unless that's right) but for the most part it is just...

anyways, this was off the top of my head, I was messing around in photoshop and then I came up with the title by fluke, ~LordoftheMorning wanted me to do another submission so i decided a poem, with the title that i was going to give the photoshop piece, this is completely off the top of my head...

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Mmmm.... [link]
:licking: :fuzzydemon:
hehehy thanx for chosing my deviation on your poem :D i appreciated:)

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